Tuesday, April 28, 2009
New Planet Discovery
A new planet has recently been discovered in a new galaxy, which is about the same size as our own planet. This planet discovery was found in the Gliese 581 galaxy by a group of European Astronomers. The planet is a little larger than our own and orbits a dim red star. This planet, which is 20 light-years away from our own planet, has no chance of life, or so scientists believe. The planet orbits to close to the sun, which would lead to heavy contact with deadly radiation. These results were announced at a conference at the University of Hertfordshire in England.
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1. Straight and to the point
ReplyDelete2. shows why there is no life expected on the planet
3. shows what the planet orbits
1. not enough information on the planet.
2. doesn't tell how the scientists came upon it
1. I learned that there was a new planet that was found recently.
1) The article was explained concisely
ReplyDelete2) He gave all the facts and did not forget any details
3) His summary was not filled with useless information
1) He does not tell us about previous planet discovery
2) He did not say how the planet was found
1) This article taught me of how a planet was found in Gliese 581 galaxy by European Astronomers.
1) Crisp explanation.
ReplyDelete2) Forgot no details.
3) Exquisite use of english language.
1) Could say more.
2) Did not tell about how discovery was made.
1) I learned about the planet in Gliese 581 galaxy.
1. It is to the point there is no fluf.
ReplyDelete2. He gave solid details.
3. He did not leave out any needed information.
1. It could have been a little longer.
2. Could have said more about how scientists found the planet.
1. The planet is 20 light years away from our planet.
1) Concise and to the point
ReplyDelete2)Killer details
3)Easy to understand
1)Fails to mention how the planet was found
2) Could have been longer
1)I learned how this planet was found by european astronomers
1. Brief and straight to the point.
ReplyDelete2. Easy to comprehend.
3. Good use of details.
1. Could be longer.
2. Could have added a few more details about the planet.
1. I learned that a new planet was discovered in a new galaxy by European astronomers.
1) No extra information .
ReplyDelete2) Good details.
3) Good explanations.
1) Could have been longer.
2) Could have explained previous planet discovery
1) I learned that this planet is 20 light years away from Earth.
1. very interesting
ReplyDelete2. he gave allot of good facts
3. no fluff
1. could have been longer
2. did not mention how the planet was found
1. i learned that there was a new planet that was found
1. Great use of facts and details.
ReplyDelete2. Choose an interesting artical.
3.Shows why there is no life expectense on planet.
1. Could have had a longer summary.
2. Fails to mention how this planet was found.
1. I lerned of the discovery of a new planet.